Kashmir & Iera by *soleha*

Kashmir was presented by Miranti Ningrum, an Indonesian girl in our class. Previously, Pakistan and India used to be one. This is because they have the same enemy, British. However, once they get independence, they cannot unite anymore. It happened because they realized that they have differences. They first went to war in October, 1947 after Pakistan supported a Muslim insurgency in Kashmir. After several years, the war ended on January 1, 1949. After 1949, there were also other issues and conflicts raised between the and even it still happens until today.

Back to the presenter, Miss Miranti…. As usual, even though you are nervous, you always look confidence…sometimes its “over confidence” also..hehehe..just joking!! I agree with Madam Shafizan that you had a good introduction. In terms of the presentation, you should avoid from reading the slides because once you started doing that, you will lost to establish eye contact with the audience. I also think that you could improve on in terms of answering questions. You should know more about Kashmir as you have quite enough time to do the preparation. Last but not least, you should minimize your non-word, “apa nie??” as it could distract your presentation. Before I forget, this time you did not use pink color as your slides background right..?? Hehehe.. Anyhow... congrats and good luck for the next presentation.