PALESTINE & MISS EYLLIA....(Soleha)

Palestine is not an independent state as it has never had sovereignty over any territory. They have been fighting for the sovereignty of their country for many years ago. Palestinians have been attacked by the Jews from Israeli as the Jews wanted to have the land. Palestine is not recognized by the United Nations, although the European Union, as well as the most member states. In my opinion, I also agree with some of the classmates that the war is not just about fighting over the land but it also has something to do with spiritual belief. As Muslims, Palestinians have strong belief that they will win in the war and the Jews also hold that they will be able to take the land at the end. Besides, the conflict never ended because as other Muslims countries, Palestine also faced the same problem with Muslims in their country itself, in which they are fighting with one another. Basically, this is the tactic used by them to manipulate Muslims so it is easier for them to get inside. Therefore, Muslims around the world should unite themselves rather than quarreling with each other.

Now…let us move to the presenter, a lady named Eyllia. First of all, thank you for presenting such informative information to us. I am not here to condemn you as I am also not that good in presentation. However, as a classmate, I think, there are several things that you could improve on and it is not just for you actually, it goes to me too..!!!
First, in terms of preparation. That was good that you had prepared a week before the presentation…but you know….sometimes it doesn’t enough as this is an informative speech. It seems like you do not know your points and that makes you nervous standing in front the class. Second, I terms of presenting the information. As Madam Shafizan has said, it was good to have “cards” to insist but you should avoid from reading the whole text as when you were doing so, you will lost to have interaction with the audience. Finally, in terms of gesture and eye contact. These can be avoided if good preparation has been done before the presentation.

Don’t worry Eyllia…there are always many things for us to improve on as we are in the process of learning. So…good luck for the next2 presentation. Wish me luck too..!